|Reviews for If God Makes The Water Hot|
| stained blue 6/13/08 . chapter 1
it feels like it lacks something,
i don't know what but i still love it;
it feels so powerful.
| a silenced revolution 5/25/08 . chapter 1
i rather like the overall sense of... strangeness, i guess. the idea of judges spitting and flying and God making the water hot
lends the poem originality. i can't really tell what it's about, but the words sound good in the way you've arranged them. especially love the first line; very evocative imagery. nice job.
-adrian, from the review marathon (link in my profile).