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| the brightest fell 2008-05-28 ch 1,  | abuseI kind of like the vagueness of your poem; the unspecified imagery. (: Good poem. |
| Isca 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuse"She laid just attempting to decipher what went wrong." Great line! Sad, but good poem! |