This is so...beautiful. The storyline itself works very well, but that's not the part I like so much about it. I just see this wonderful little film clip and it captures an absolutely perfect moment.

-Peace out.

I really liked this piece. I honestly don't have anything to say bad about it.

It was very well done, and the writing style was very impresive. I only wish I could write stories like this - I don't even bother posting nonpoetry on here.

This was very attention grabbing for a oneshot, and I salute you for that. I find myself wanting to know more about Rain, as well as the girl.