I had a feeling that was going to happen. The names were similar, so for a little while, I was wondering. Wow! She's the heir of Lerien'yth! That's so cool! Wonder how and why she was taken to the human world when she was so young? Lots of mysteries!

Sounds like Cara and Sanna are having fun together, but I can't quite shake that short moment of difference in her; when she changed from the silly girl to someone completely different. Wonder what she might be hiding... More mysteries! Well... keep on writing!

Sanňa seems nice, and yes, shockingly similar to Cara with her laughs and smiles. Wonder why that is... also wonder why Cara doesn't seem to know her very well, even though she wrote her. Interesting. Wonder if someone's managed to muck with the story or something. Lots of mysteries!

Keep on writing!

Oh, wow! Sanňa has arrived! What a cliffhanger to end a chapter on!
If Bäldassare knew about Cameron already, then... I'm wondering why he hid him. The second Cara told him about it, he made sure to let everyone know. I guess he had no choice really. Once it's out there, you can't really cover it up anymore. Wonder what gonna happen now...

Keep on writing!

I like that you added in a chapter from Kip's point of view. Gives a more well-rounded sense to the story. I was wondering if we were going to find out what Kip was doing at some point. Seems like he's stuck doing the ship work, but at least he still with them. Well anyways, keep on writing!

Woh. Interesting. I remember you saying something about Cameron in class, but I can't remember what it was. He seems important though. I think he's probably someone that Ariella's going to be following for a while. Hey, who knows? Maybe he's the Lost Prince? What with Cara thinking that his kidnapping was planned. Also her thinking that he is more important than he's been told. Well, keep on writing!

Oh boy! Me thinks Bäldassare likes Cara! Uh oh! He's a little too old for her! Guess he figures he can do anything being a king and all. But really, he's gotta be way older than her. How old is he? Regardless, he's still older than her, and that just isn't right. Thankfully Kade's watching over her. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep on writing!

Aww... Cara and Kade are so cute together! Love how Cara and Bäldassare danced all night and had a good time. If he wasn't the bad guy of the story, I'd say that they could be the best of friends. He has the kindest side to him! He knows how to have fun to! I never thought I'd see that side of a bad guy; as far as I know, they typically don't have one. Loving all these 'as planned' parts! Also loving this side of Bäldassare! Well, keep writing! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Didn't Bäldassare already have the 'lodgings' conversation with them in chapter 5? I just noticed it seemed to be an exact repeat of the conversation.
Cara is playing around with Bäldassare so much, it's funny! Gets kind of scary when he starts talking dangerously though... Good thing Cara's able to stop that everytime he does it though. He seems to have a kind and humble side to him, almost as if Cara could have him as a good friend, but he seems to switch to his dangerous side pretty easily. Well, keep on writing! I love the way these chapters are going!

Heh, Kip was called a theif! Ah well, at least it got him onto the ship right? That was so perfect! I take it “The Conrí” means "The King"? Clever plans they have to get onto Bäldassare's ship! Keep on writin'!

Wow, never saw Bäldassare being like that! He's so nice, and humble when he wants to be! LOL! Apparently he still has his dangerous side though, with that last "I insist". This is the best chapter ever! So many things going on; I couldn't take my eyes off the screen! Wow! I can't believe Cara is flirting with Bäldassare! LOL! This chapter made me laugh so much! The fact that Cara, the writer, is right beside Bäldassare, and he doesn't even know who she is, is hilarious! Everything is, 'as planned', fits so well! Wow! Write more chapters like this! PLEASE!

A little love thoughts going on between Cara and Kade? I like that you delved a little deeper into Cara and Kade's past, it helps the story a lot.

I thought Lerien'yth was the whole world they were in? Is it just one of the continents or something? You said Emeet and it are missing their heirs, they're separate?

Please keep writing!

Chasing after Bäldassare to Dariah huh? And Ariella needing to talk to a certain boy... I wonder what about? Interesting...

Anyways...

Please keep writing!

Wow! They actually hit him! They actually hit Bäldassare! I take it Bäldassare doesn't know who the author is? Does he know her face? Is that why she was glad to have the helmet on, hiding her face?

Please, please, please write more! You've stopped it at a freaking pinnacle point!

Yay! I finally caught up! Now write more!

BATTLE! I sure hope they win, but HOLY CROW HE HAS A HUGE ARMY! Twenty thousand and still more coming?! IMPOSSIBLY HUGE! Good luck Cara, you're gonna need it!

Please keep writing!