 Guest 2009-05-07 . chapter 8 The ending of this story ticked me off. (no offense) I'm all for angst and depression, unrequited love, etc. but there's really no need I could see why they couldn't be together, other than an intentional unhappy ending and who wants those when it's soo clear they should've wound up together... Well, authors perogative I guess :) |
 TwoClovedHooves 2008-06-02 . chapter 4Aww, so cute... |
 Esquirella 2008-06-02 . chapter 4Holly the matchmaker?! AWESOME! |
 gummybaby 2008-05-31 . chapter 4These are the cutest little snippets ever. I love their relationship. It makes me smile. |
 Pretty. Odd 2008-05-31 . chapter 4haha this is cute :D I love this story. I love Holly. He's so adorable. |
 DevilishMisfit 2008-05-31 . chapter 4Ha ha, this chapter was pretty funny, I really liked it. |
 Esquirella 2008-05-23 . chapter 3The things he'll do for Holly. LOL! |
 calamity jane 2008-05-23 . chapter 3 LOL...Holly's so funny...I luv him! Great chap...update again soon...please!? |
 Pretty. Odd 2008-05-21 . chapter 2lol. I ** love Holly. He's so cool |
 Esquirella 2008-05-21 . chapter 2LOL! Well we know how pulls the strings in that friendship, don't we? Great update! |
 TwoClovedHooves 2008-05-21 . chapter 2chocolate sundaes...truly, a weakness one need not ever be ashamed of. that was actually a surprising thing at the end, although that's the kind of thing i expected it to be in the beginning. nice. |
 calamity jane 2008-05-21 . chapter 2 Good story! I like the way you write , it flows together naturally and is very easy to read. Keep up the great work and looking forward to more Gabe and Holly! |
 TwoClovedHooves 2008-05-20 . chapter 1This is pretty cute. Please, continue the ficlets! |
 Esquirella 2008-05-20 . chapter 1This is a very cool start! |