I like your story

Wow. Absolutly amazing. MUST READ NEXT!

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LVOE IT! IT IS SO CUTE! I ESPECIALLY LOVE LIAM, SIMON, AND KATIE! Your idea is amazing! How did you come up with this?

I just had to say I loved the beginning! It would be so cool if either A) SHe finds a friend from another cat, B) She descovers she had not one power, but a few, or C) she falls for this SImone guy...guess I have to keep reading!

I believe I am addicted to your work, for I cannot stop reading. This was amazing, great job!

Great so far. I'm quite glad that you posted on my forum because I useally read longer stories. But I really like it. And will read more when I have time.

You have rally good expression and you know what you want to say, but you need to be careful and look over any mistakes that could appear. Paragraphing when posting is important, you have a paragraph that breaks in mid sentence. It is important to have it perfect so it does not annoy readers.

Showing not telling. It can be hard to do at times, and I certainly find it hard, but it makes the story a lot more fun to read than have everything served out in front of the reader with nothing to think about. It takes a lot of practice!

Other than those things I think you have a good concept here. Keep workiing with it, write, edit and keep rewriting if you are serious about this. I would like to see it polished! :D

Good work!

-Claire

very very very awesome! I love how you bring in a new world thats...well...new! Very awesome job, great discription and i love how you drew me in! very nice job and can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Oh my god... I LOVE It some of your grammar was a little off and you had a couple misspellings that probably should be fixed but you have an amazing plot line and beautifully detailed content. Cant wait to read the next one!

this was really good, is there another part to it?