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JC 2009-12-07 . chapter 4
OMG KEEP WRITING THIS! lol, I'm in love. Please update, I'd love you forever... hahaha
Great story (obviously) Love the characters and their development.
Regin 2009-07-06 . chapter 4
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Julia Caron 2009-03-23 . chapter 4
OMG! Katie, you are a freakin' BEAST! I absolutly love this chapter of the story! You gave such great details! Good job girl! :)
Heather.Y 2009-02-07 . chapter 4
This is really good. Can't wait to read the next chapter.^_^
I think Damien is my favorite character so far. He's wonderful^_^
sniff 2009-02-01 . chapter 4
i wish you'd continue this one! i love this one >.<
:'(
liddobones 2009-01-11 . chapter 4
More updates pls!
December 2008-11-02 . chapter 4
please please continue this story i think itsi getting really interesting!
groovi-gal-numba1 2008-09-14 . chapter 1
the dramatic descriptions got annoying after a while. you know all the "school is a prison, a torture chamber and my heart yearns for something more" type talk. i know that may just be the 'drama queen' like attitude of the character, but its still irritating.

that said, i really like the dialouge. its humourous and natural. oh, and of course, romantic. haha!

as for characters, Mr Night irritates me. he's a sleeze! and i find lezlie irritating at times (shes a little to overdramatic!). but when they are together they do seem to fit well - you know, chemistry and all that.

you have some really good descriptions.

Bright blue eyes framed by dark eyelashes peered down at me. His burning gaze raked up and down my body slowly.

that one made me quiver! in a good way of course. you have a unuiqe and interesting way of putting things.

overall i enjoyed it! but maybe tone down the drama

xoxox groovi
1337roflcopter 2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Oh uhm, wow. First thing thought when Mr. Night licked his lips was "rape is imminent."(XD) But yes, the plot took me quite by surprise as I never actually expected the girl's 'infatuation' to be towards a teacher. The pacing was quick, or at least Mr. Night was quick on voicing his 'concern' about Leslie. I also like the description and I can totally relate to Leslie about school and being so eager for graduation! Except I just graduated from eighth grade instead of twelfth. Well, this is only my review for the first chapter, I'm going to go read the rest. ^^
RedMoonChick 2008-07-23 . chapter 1
this story seems off to a great start, though logically, I would get an order of protection against Steven.

I work in the world of Criminal Law lol so yea, if a person were to ever violate an order of protection, it would be a felony. So yea, pretty serious stuff... sorry, I hope there is a reason Leslie is refusing to go to the police...

Cant wait to see what you come up with for this story and hope u update soon!
teegan 2008-07-15 . chapter 4
really good cant wait for an update
I'mYourChemicalRomance 2008-07-14 . chapter 4
Mhm, I like this one, too.:3
It's so cute.
Twilight Starr 2008-07-09 . chapter 4
Thanks for the reviews. I really appreciate it.

Damien took his car being damaged well. The near kiss was very intriguing, indeed. Even more interesting was the fact he mentioned the teacher afterwards. Nice work. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2008-07-09 . chapter 3
I like that she stood up to her friend and that Damien tried to avoid conflict. It's great that Mr. Night played the Night-in-shining armor. ;) Kidding about the spelling if you're thinking I'm an idiot. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2008-07-09 . chapter 2
Poor thing. Steven is an awful guy. Great job at showing her vulnerability.

~Twilight Starr~
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