so they got bak together

Aw... it's so sweet.

Cute.

And I love the little flashback at the beginning. :]

You’re a city girl, which (With?) so much going on for you
YAY! its so cute!
XxCrossMyHeartxX

Hm...the ending was interesting. I liked the plot and the characters, but the ending seemed a bit abrupt. But good job! :)

u should at a little more at the end about what happens to them

really cute story!

The ending was okay, not too shaby. I loved the flashback a lot, (probably because I like angsty stuff, ehehehe) the way you put Meg's sorrowness and stuff. :)

Good work!

Aww, I'm really glad they met up.
It was really cute, and well written.
Great job

Oh! Too cute! :D -hughughug- Lovelovelove! :P

Strawberry xx

Your Stories are just so great!

that was so cool. I think you might've made the ending a little longer though. But if you went into more detail about the 1st summer and had a more descriptive ending you could make it a book. one of those sweet, sappy love stories. I think this is the best story line of all of your stuff on fictionpress. great job! :)

this is good

Cute!
I think the ending's fine. It's gives you space for imagination, and the writing's good.

Just one tip- "CHocolate-eyed love" might be a bit much.

=)