Hey, I was intrigued by your review on someone else's story, so I decided to meander over here and check out your site. I do hope you plan on finishing 'Mens Rea' off, as it has a lot of potential, and you have a very nice writing style as compared to many on FP xD

Have you read Sophie Kinsella's book 'Remember Me'? Yes, it -is- chick lit (shame on me, chick lit is one of my guilty pleasures), but there are similarities between that story and yours.

In any case, I hope you continue with this story! If you have the time, I'd much appreciate some feedback on my story :)

Thanks,

Syl

aw that was a sweet chapter ^^ lol

i love seeing how these characters have changed since the beginning. i always like that about stories lol

nice work once again

x lauren

nice chapter :) you sure fit a lot into these! lol

nick seems interesting

x lauren

ooh! they are friends! yay! lol. you have a really good voice and good descriptions :)

x lauren

ooh i liked the last line :) i sense good things for charlotte and kal ;) lol. ive always liked that name. lol

good job on the chapter. u got the 'new girl' feeling down spot on :D

x lauren

I liked the consistancy of the 'Beep. Beep.' great work. good descriptions. i'm really liking this :)

x lauren

Hey, man, good story. I was once a flammer on this site, but I have recently changed my ways. I felt compelled to review your story, as you added mine to your favorites. All in all, I found your writing style unique and your tone outstandig. To all the people I flamed, I want to say that I am no longer a flamer; rather, I wish to regain honor as a reputable writer reviewer.