I love the imagery of

"The deformed metal sculpture at the end of the road,
which is museum-worthy art".

Great poem.

-W. Griffin

This is a neat poem. It's simple and gets the thought across. It is all about the race, not where they are going or what they win. Again, this is a neat little poem.

i like how it was cut off-ish at the end. seems perfect for what seems to have happened in this poems background.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,
gg