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dragonflydreamer 2008-08-23 ch 1,	abuseReview Game! You packed a lot of meaning into very few words. I like how even though it's one full sentence, this still unfolds line by line. The lines are all slightly independant of each other and they each carry their own meaning. I don't understand the contradiction of "but" at the end. I think I see what you're going for--that inside she's in turmoil, but outside she's numb--but seeing as all you said was that "she trembles inside," it's possible that she's trembling and numb :/ Sorry, I'll stop my rant. Great work as always! I love your haiku :)
Breaks-like-crystal 2008-05-30 ch 1,	abuseI like it because you fit so much into so few words
PrincessPeaches 2008-05-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is how I feel atm with a certain friendship!
losing gracie girl 2008-05-20 ch 1,	abusenice job. i like how u were able to put so much detail into so few words. yours until the wind changes, gg