I like this, nicely done. I especially like the switch up at the end of the piece.

Leading us no where,... nowhere

I like the rhyming is this piece it's subtle and not forced at all. I also like the ending because it's interesting, who you are rooting for. Nice job!

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lisa?
are you cheating on barack obama?

*hug*
love you.

I so no what you mean! It sucks so bad... hope it all workds out for you.

xKristie Mariex

Wow, ok, where to begin? First off, HI! :) glad to see you are still writing :) second on the to do list, awesome poem as usual, I enjoyed it greatly. Haha, yes I DO have a LOT of questions about all of this! I hope to learn more :)