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Caecilia
2008-08-13
ch 1,
abuseI love your closing lines. I don't know why, but I find them hilarious.

About Jonathan being a brother worth having-- that's hilarious.

Cute story, funny relationship with Jonathan and Melissa.

~~Beer Run August, at the Roadhouse [Link in profile]
~Caecilia
Fin of Tsuki
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseThis is one of the cutest short stories I had read here. Good job!
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