lol xD youve finally updated. And i cant help but be curious. what were they banned for?

Nice chapter, and his name is James? Fitting, really.

I like the chapter, its well built and leaves us wanting more.

Haha, nextime update within a couple months yeah? Pwease :3

^^

Sam
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whatever type of ...person? bell? is, i'm amused ~.~ oh lol wow, xD i hope you'd update soon =)

heya there, truly an amzing story, please conmtinue.
im sad to say that where i live they block adult fan fiction, and as a faithful reader my plea to you is if you would spend a moment and send me the unedited longer verion? please - thats all i ask, oh and as well as please DONT stop

a truly beautifl story, and i patiently wait here for your reply, if you will give one

youre awesome-always
ciao
Sam

Could you explain the whole pregnancy thing? I get that she's a different species (er..right?), but I'm a bit confused. How could Rissa get her pregnant, and why not he king? Rissa is a different species than both of them, yeah?
But yeah, nice chapter.

Wow, that was good, but u could have been a bit more detailed, damn, this story is good, update soon please.^^By the way i absolutely love the pic, it's so sexy

i hope no one bothers them *grins evily*

Yes! She gives in, at least. You are a smart girl, Rissa.

Ahh I understand it now ;]. I really like the weird plot twists. Especially with how the narrator isn't even human and can control if she has a child or not (if I understand that correctly).

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Aww.. They hold hands. =). I wonder how her species is different..

You're an incredibly talented writer. I love the way you work your prose, and I love her point of view.

I read the earlier review about interest in what time period this is...I kind of like not knowing. I think it's really interesting. The relationship between Rissa and the narrator is great - you have a really classy, believable way of depicting it.

I'm impressed. Great story so far.

Wonderful, love the story, update soon.

I like it. A lot to be honest. I want to know the time setting though. It has a hint of modernism, but obviously filled with the renaissance and medieval ages.

Hmm, good contrast that is.

Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :]

LOL I feel sorry for her and yet I dont ...humph *pouts*

This story is well written. I enjoy her inner monologue. Different plot too. Can't wait for an update. =)
Hehe.. That rhymed.

ooh, great start!
this guard sounds great ^_^
can't wait to see how these two work out