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nice oneshot. scott's brave.

That ending was really funny...nice job. The entire story was funny, so good job! :)

Very much like the ending.

Yeah. I get what you mean. Or else it'd be cliche. And cliches are not fun. :D That's such a great story. Still employed. Hmm... suits the story perfectly :D

Aw...well that was cute. And yeah, I suppose I'm glad you ended it that way, something different but they did end up together right? I'm sorry, I can't resist. I love happy endings but I suppose real life isn't like those mushy i-love-you-forever-and-ever scenes.

Yeah, I love your one shots and not so one shot one shots. They're amazing.

I liked this ending as well. Good story. They were so cute. :)

I'm glad you made the ending like this! Hurrah, something different!

I'm curious, did you manage to have any fun at the bakery? And the manager of your friend caught you guys at the back of the kitchen and screamed his/her head off? Woah haha! =D

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So freaking cute :) I love all your one shots and not-so-one-shot-one-shots. They're BRILLIANT. Thank you for sharing!
And also, it's kinda nice without the whole cliched type deal. I thought it ended pretty cool :)

I do like this, and the absence of declarations-of-undying-love. This is well-written, funny, cute, and creative. (: Kudos to Queen of Absolutely Everything for adding this to our c2. (:

Haha, I loved it :)
and that bit at the end about his job, and ahem, current state of employment just made me giggle :D

Yay! No declarations of undying love! My favorite! Yeah, I don't like it much when there is an "I-love-you-forever" factor. Well done with that.

I love this story too. I actually (for once) don't think this story needs a sequal you ended it just right so I'm fine without one. It was a cute one-shot and what's her problem w/ knives?

Aw, that was adorable! What is it with bakers and being cute?

I think you expressed what you wanted to express. =D It was a really good read - the characters were well developed and there wasn't this sappy gooey stuff sticking to everything and clogging it. It was refreshing, really. ^_^ I like it lots.