Damn, I was pretty disappointed when the chapter just stopped like that. I still have a problem with the paragraphs--they heart my eyes cause they're hard to read--I really liked this second chapter and want to see what's next. Though, it's kind of weird, her still being spoken of in 'she' and all.

Your paragraphs are really long, which is kind of intimidating. I forced myself to read through this because the idea's pretty interesting, but because the length makes them just look like big square blocks of words, readers may go through a case of TL;DR. The pity factor Amy has really makes her sympathetic to a lot of readers, and I want to see how she copes with being a boy.

Hmm tiz interesting so far,
hope you update soon =D

this is really good! i hope you right more soon!

Oh wow. I really really like this. I like the way you're writing it too. You don't skim over the details but you don't spend ages spelling it out. I'm curious about Riley's past, and I wanna know what happens on Amy/Riley's first day at the Academy. I'm just gonna wait till the next update.

Riley sounds like a real cutie~ ;D

Amy's personality makes me want to hug and squish her and tell her everything is alright, but alas I cannot u.u I love this chapter and I hope everything goes her way for once in the next chapter.

Looking forward to more~

Your writing is hilarious. Please don't ever lose that flavor to your narrative voice...it's very genuine.

I think you should continue. I wanna know what happens next.

Well I think it was great. I really enjoyed it. I think that all beginnings are a bit boring and confusing until you get to the end. But they are only beginnings, that's whet they're for. I was hoping there was another chapter. Had I looked I would have known that there isn't. Oh well lol. Can't wait to read more.

This story has caught my attention. Hopefully you will continue so I can see how this will all go.