Reviews for Heaven's Not Enough

SerialXLain 2008-06-11 ch 1,	Ahh, I really like it with all the different names. "In Sheol I’m silent in the Pit I’m mute in Death my lips are sown shut." I really like those lines and the one about Eden. I like the repetition too with phrases either starting or endign the same..
Tiernan Hunter 2008-05-29 ch 1,	Well, I think it's good. I could never write something that good for just a school packet, so I definitely give you kudos for that. I really liked it, even if i didn't know what all of those ideas of places were, exactly. It still got the idea across.