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| Midnight In Eden 2008-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseTwo things - "It's" instead of "Its" and "I'm" instead of "im". Plus I think the first two lines might work better as one... Either way, this is a simple but well expressed piece with a sentiment a lot of people would empathise with, though I wouldn't mind maybe a backstory (perhaps for another poem). Thanks for sharing, Midnight |