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| I Am Ghost 2008-05-22 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was really good. I liked the way the words flow, and the meaning behind it. My favorite line: "You’re not paying attention to the staples beneath my fingernails or the sutures behind my smile; is it easier not to see?" And: "I suppose it’s simpler to ignore all the imperfections than to acknowledge that you’ll never be able to fix me." |