Amazingly well-written. Grammar and everything was in check, making it very readable, even though sometimes it's hard to tell who's talking. I love the characters. I like that they aren't one-dimensional and everything is kept very real. Good work. :D

Love love loved this! Amazing! Pure Genius!

Can't write much right now seeing as I'm supposed to sleep! Still totally buzzed from this story!

you're my new God!

For Some Reason I Imagine The Voice Over From Desperate Housewives When The Narrator Is Speaking. lol

I absolutly LOVE this story. You did a great job, and i loved reading it, twice XD

I adore this story, Brody and Linden are so sweet definitely one of my faves :)

Wow what a great story. I cudnt stop reading it and I'm seriously wishing that there was more because it was just so good. I loved Brody's character and that you kept everything so real and honest. You have amazing skills.

Wa this was great!
I really loved reading it
really, really cool story!

OwO

It was a bit confusing, but not bad. :D

This is absolutely lovely. I don't have to write a high school story now, because you did what I wanted to do, and did it well. There's a kind of gentle, light feel to the whole thing that leaves me smiling.

One criticism, and I think it's major enough to require a thorough editing pass when you have time for it: it's often difficult to tell who's talking. Especially in the first half, you often have one character's action attached to another character's dialogue. There are also some switches of POV that, while technically allowed in omniscient third-person, don't really work with the straightforward style you're doing here, but that's less of a problem.

Aside from those issues, this is pretty much perfect. Thank you for a teenage protagonist who's not lobotomized by angst; thank you for a popular kid who's witty enough to deserve his popularity; thank you for an 'outsider' who's not bitterly looking in; thank you for an interfering girl friend who's not always right; thank you for a conflicted parent who's not a cardboard caricature; and thank you for a happy ending that doesn't solve everything forever. In short, thanks for doing it right.

I loved that before last paragraph. really beatiful.
The story is pretty cute up to now, specially their banter (?) in the first chapter.

Beautiful story :) Adding it to my favorites.
Love the way you write.

Aw... just aw... the cuteness! it's killing me!

This is a very cute story!! I love Brodys character! This is neither fluff nor does it really have a plot, but in the end almost everything is fine. Mia is a great girl, I hope she'll fine the right match for her.

First of all, I can't believe this story haven't got more reviews. It's so good and fun to read.

I love Brody, and I guess this story is about him, after all. I like Linden too, and I'd love to get to know him better, and Mia. About Mia, actually, I didn't like her at first. Now I don't dislike her or anything, but I still think I'd like Grace better. But Mia IS cool anyway, and I feel so sorry about her. And about Michael too, actually. I sort of wish I knew what happens next, because everything is still pretty messed up. I don't know what I'd do in Brody's situation. I'd probably avoid Mia or something, but I think he deals with things(and girls) better than I do, so I trust him to at least try not to hurt her. After all, she's a princess, and he's a perfect gentleman.

But well, they're in High School. Everyone is going to get over it eventually. Life happens, right?

And, anyway, I like Fight Club.

I love this story! It was so funny and awesome. Thanks so much. you should definitely make a sequel. PLEASE!