|Reviews for prelude to sunday|
| Bradbury1945 3/31/13 . chapter 1
| Ondine's Curse 3/11/10 . chapter 1
you got me at the first stanza.
| effervescent-sentiments 4/7/09 . chapter 1
Oh, that was kind of creepy. Me like. :D
There are so many lines in this I'd like to pick out and parade around, but that'd pretty much be the whole poem. I love the reoccuring schizophrenic. At first he seems like a backdrop and then you realize he's the star of the show.
More of the rhythm and repetition. :) You pull it off, my dear.
| this is britt 6/28/08 . chapter 1
feels like a sunday, if that makes sense. all the images and thoughts and emotions you wrote about (as beautiful as ever) come together and feel so...sunday-ish. anyway: the poem feels so meaningful and global and at the end so small and personal, which is a wonderful thing. i had no idea you were back on this website, but i come on so on-and-off, but it's great to see your writing again (even if fictionpress murders formatting).