I want to say "aww" but I guess that's not really the appropriate response.

For some reason, I really like the "I'm so lost" aspect of this poem.

Nice job. (:

I've read through some of your earlier works and I see a lot of improvement. Wonderful work! This is so far my most favourite piece of yours. :)

I wrote something smililar to this. I guess its the sentiment of it that reminded me of it, but this is beautiful and wonderful and wonderful and beautiful. I adore it. i can't even explain why but this line sums its up for me:

"A stranger lamented softly about that silly girl

who lost herself as she spoke to the silent stars

so far above reality that even the heavens couldn't save her."