hm. It is certainly interesting. In a good way.
you asked for advice on to make it better so,
Your characters are all very similar they talk the same way, they react the same way, maybe you should come up with more defining personalities for each of them to make them seem more real.

Some of what you write is very vauge. The part when she is pulled into the room, and that guy is explaining about his childhood with Robin, that should probably be fleshed out a bit more. Also the end part, after she kills Robin, You should probably go into more detail about that, as well as the beggining. Yes, she has super power, but more specifically, what are they how did she get them? Maybe if you started teh story in a different place a little earlier on. How did she find this Robin guy, why was she spying on him in an alley? Also the whole huner thing is confusing, why does he want her dead, what about a huntress? It's the details that need work.

Other then that it seems to be comming along nicely, it's a good base for a story, and I'm sure it will get much better the more you work on it.

I think you deserved the writer's camp. Next year for sure. I did a quick scan of this (it needs another careful reading). It is well constructed and interesting... somewhat complex. More to come after the holiday.

Interesting ending...

I like it.