A beautiful and touching piece, I'm glad you've posted this. I guess I've always liked the end of the world stuff, too, come to think of it.

one of the best reads ever. so amazingly beautiful, especially for a one shot. love it. im overly sensitive. one of my greatest weaknesses/flaws. you guessed it...yup i cried. and hard. lol

I can't even find words to express how beautiful this story is.
I like how you put in subtle hints to imply the end of the world.
Jenna and David are just so cute. ;]

Thankyou for such a wonderful read. (:

This was so sweet and pretty...i just really enjoyed it. Sure, it was sad, but they were happy when they were together. Great job!

That was kinda depressing, but awesome at the same time. There was just enough back story for each of the characters so that the reader wasn't lost, but not so much that your story became too wordy. It was short and sweet and I loved it. So thanks!

End of the world books/movies? Hmm. Wonderfully done. I liked this one quite a bit. Yay for letting us read it. :)
Love Elodie~

Depressing but cute. I like my angst :D And I'm done being your stalker for today :D

Are you published?

If you aren't, then you should be. You have an incredible knack for this, and this a rather original idea, at least for a short story. I like it, oh so very much. Your characters are beautiful, very human. David reminds me of my [very tall, very scruffy, very sardonic] boyfriend, which only made it even easier to identify with Jenna.

Gorgeous story. I'm changing residence soon, but after all that fuss is over I plan on coming back and reading your other stories.

One word: beautiful...

Sweet, sad ending. I loved it despite being one to pefer happy endings... well this ending was kind of happy until "one nineteen". =]

aw this is the cutest thign ever:)

Great story! However if it were the end of the world I'd do more than just kiss ;)