 Sanna 2009-11-22 . chapter 30 hey hey i just wanted to say i think u did a fab job on this story i really really enjoyed it lol,i didnt want it to end, well hope all is well xx |
 Dagonmaster 2009-10-22 . chapter 1Hello there, New reviewer here.
I have to commend you for a job well done. In terms of writing, it was excellent for it had excellent pacing and flow.
Also from what I've read, didn't see any grammatical errors- a big plus in my view. I also liked how you characterized Jessica. She's someone whose been given a lot and is very bright as a result.
She also from what I've read seemed very independent as well as, methodical which is a good. Also her rivalry- both personality and academically with Laurenz Noir was both realistic and well played out.
I did feel bad for Jessica when she lost her place as valedictorian. The scene with her finding out about who Noir is was done well.
Overall, I'm offically hooked and thus, I can't wait to read more.
Once more Great job! |
 XxJOKERxX 2009-10-09 . chapter 30 When are you going to update your story. I want to know what the meeting is going to be about. Hurry up! On with the story... |
 Elyssa Morales 2009-09-21 . chapter 30Ooh...what's going on with Louis? |
 SassyGrl 2009-09-01 . chapter 30update soon!! |
 chicagobabe 2009-09-01 . chapter 30LoL Laurenz,there both cute, hehe loved the chapter cant wait to hear what Louis had to say :) |
 Caroline 2009-08-31 . chapter 1 Wow, this first chapter is really engaging. Good job! |
 XAxHealingxHeartX 2009-08-31 . chapter 30Sorry it took so long to catch up, but I loved the updates! And I'm super glad that he isn't really dead, scared me for a minute, lol.
Can't wait for the next :D |
 T34rSoFBLoOd 2009-08-30 . chapter 30LOVE IT :) It's cute and awesome :3
I love the way Laurez is with Jessica. It makes me squeal with happiness, haha. |
 DeirdreC 2009-08-29 . chapter 30great ch. I really love this story |
 akaCHEEKS 2009-08-29 . chapter 30oh jesus. that's all they ever do now a days. haha. but yes! finally an update! now when's the next one? i feel like this one was just a filler. |
 chicagobabe 2009-08-22 . chapter 29awh, loved the chapter! U gotta update soon |
 chicagobabe 2009-08-21 . chapter 28woahh like woah
this is like one of the best vampire story i've read so far
and im in love with it :D, and i actully thought he was dead and all ddnt think he will be back! |
 chicagobabe 2009-08-19 . chapter 1OH em Gee. I'm hooked already! loved the first chapter :D. |
 Shana2004 2009-08-09 . chapter 1Hahahah! Awwesome intro hmm it kind of remind of vampire knight. I love that anime! U have made my vamp search story worth it. I'll keep on reading. |