I really like this piece because it’s like a note, which is really sweet. I also like the sun set and lullaby thing, it’s different for the subject matter. The only thing is in the second line I don’t think you need that comma. Sorry for your loss.

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this is beautiful and extremely heart-felt.

nice job!

yours until the wind changes,

gg

wow ayla. this is so sad, but so sweet. i love it so much. *hugs* itll be ok...

ilym