|Reviews for A Play on the Life of Melony|
| simpleplan13 5/24/08 . chapter 1
-And Italion pies... Italian
-She gives them to stangers and familes go by... strangers and families that go by
-Swollowed by the amber sea... swallowed
I liked the beginning because it was a play on the Brady Bunch song, though when I tried to sing it didn't really fit, which I didn't really like. However it's still a funny piece. Nice job.
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