That's a nice story. I would like to see where it goes. :) The first chapter looks like an introduction. Good one.

Take care,

Ieshwar

That's a nice story. I would like to see where it goes. :) The first chapter looks like an introduction. Good one.

Take care,

Ieshwar

Pretty decent intro. I don't understand why they would assume the two were twins based on the fact that they look the same, though. And is that guy's name Sempai? That's really weird, if so. Anyway, he seems to have a personality. And the part where one twin yells to the other that he's running for them was pretty funny.