I love how you can put so much imagery into three lines and 17 syllables. I don't really think the summary suits, though, unless it's the cause of the narrator's self-realisation that humanity and everything else are assholes.

Wow. I love this. I like 'darkness' the best, I think. It brings images to my mind, of a sunset rottening in my mouth, bitter-sweet memories, maybe. I don't know. I like this a lot.

I just love how you can fit so much meaning and emotion into such short poems! that takes real talent. :D

...sigh...

McKinley

LOVE IT!

I like how the last line just kills the initial sweetness of the first two lines. I interpreted this poem as someone who was naive and thought the world was such a happy, go-lucky place, and then they become cynical as they realize that the world is unfair/cruel.

very good pieces, keep it up :)

Faith

i like the first 2 lines. I'm not sure about the 3rd. It just strikes me as odd. I'm not sure what you're trying to convey. But the first 2 are very descriptive.

Thought provoking and creative. I especially loved the last line. It takes a lot of talent to convey so much in so few words. Excellent work!

love the imagery.

and the irony of the series' title.

thought provoking metaphors.

oh, I love that one!

McKinley

i love you last line there. It just sounds so final and fitting.

very creative. I really like this :) but I feel like it should be "hear" instead of heard.