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| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-05-24 ch 3,  | abusethe IM's are good. keep the excerpts though. i like the way you add depth with the excerpts. keep writing! |
| IAmACoolLoser 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseYou have been doing good but just remember and try to describe things more. Does that make sense? I can't really explain things...lol |
| IAmACoolLoser 2008-05-23 ch 3, | abuseI think if you added more background it would make it more interesting but whatever you decide on will work! |
| IAmACoolLoser 2008-05-22 ch 2, | abuseI want to see where this goes...Write more! |
| shy green rock 2008-05-22 ch 2, | abuseuhm interesting...I would like to see where you go with this. |