Do you synesthesia is an actual poetic device now? Love your portmanteau. Your use of punctuation helped out with the trippiness of the poem.

Very well written and portrayed. I like the thought behind this. Personally, I think the ellipse adds to the piece. Without it, it could easily get miscommunicated. I like the author's note at the bottom too =] Very well done!

It was a lovely haiku. You managed to convey a lot. The title especially was very creative. I think the ellipse (...) in the last line is unnecessary though - you don't need to add a pause, you have enough syllables, and as as stylistic thing, you're better off without.