 Sophomoric Sage 2008-05-31 . chapter 1I love this, I really do. It's simple, sweet and I can picture the scene easily. Plus I'm blue-eyed, so I'm a little biased. ;-)
I like particularly these lines:
"on the waves of
your voice
at the break of
twilight."
Something about that rings in my head as succinct to describe the soft-spoken-ness you so often get around dusk. It brings a warm feeling to me, full of fireflies. =) |