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Follow The Pendulum 2008-06-01 ch 1,	abuse"with the clouds that beat/upon the shores/of ever glowing infinite/heaven" Love it. I also like the story summary line.
Sophomoric Sage 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abuseI love this, I really do. It's simple, sweet and I can picture the scene easily. Plus I'm blue-eyed, so I'm a little biased. ;-) I like particularly these lines: "on the waves of your voice at the break of twilight." Something about that rings in my head as succinct to describe the soft-spoken-ness you so often get around dusk. It brings a warm feeling to me, full of fireflies. =)
under the influence 2008-05-23 ch 1,	abusenice :)