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| Clarelouise 2008-05-30 ch 1,  | abusethis is so magically lovely, he he! u rele have an amazing way with words, i dont know how u come up with all of these descriptions, they are so original and random but at the same time completely fit in with the subject of the poem tis soo kl :D i like the l;ast verse in particular x |
| simpleplan13 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseWhy capitalize sun? I like the piece 'cause flows from princesses to the sea to cornfields to gold really well. I also like your kinda made up words like wheat-men and pollen-light because they are really interesting. Nice job. PS If youre bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
| Auraya 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abusewow. you just keep getting better and better! I love love love the middle stanza "where white kisses blow and the sun pulls the tides" B-e-a-utiful. I really love it and it's such a clever concept too. but one little thing faerie, why have you said the language is spanish? love u :D x |