Language: 5 (it's so-so. I'm still trying to figure out some things)
Descriptions: 7 (I really enjoyed the first part with Bryan and the last part with Bion--I mean Head Scientist Bion)
Plot: 9 (I'm interested! :D)
Setting: 4 (This is probably the lowest vote you'll get from me for this review. The second section with Freela there was hardly a description. Keep up the good work)
Tilt: As I said in the Plot part of the review: I'm interested! :D