Very well done, It flows nicely and I can imagine what it would sound like in my mind. Keep it up.

the idea is great, rhyme is good, it's a cool song.

This has a marvelous audibility that lends itself well to song. The use of repetition or chant-spread lines help to solidify the sound and approach. I also like how you've zeroed in on the title, and made it not only a focal point, but an object of continuation and connection. Very well thought out. The progression of sound works well. MD:77.

this is AMAZING! you have a lot of skill! the only thing i would suggest is that maybe the chorus won't repeat the same thing the whole song. but other than that its perfect!

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Wow! I love rock love songs! You really explained the depth of the magnetic force of love between the singer and the person she's singing to. I love it!