Naw this sounds really cute but there's only a prolouge *sad face* I hope you update soon :)

IF YOU DONT UPDATE I WILL FIND YOU AND FORCE FEED YOU SOMETHING YOU DONT LIKE! so there. UPDATE. like RIGHT now. n.o.w.

No, dont change it I love the ending. Its so perfect as is. Dont get me wrong I am a total cheezeball when it comes to the brother best friend cliche happy ending thing.But there is just something so original about this story, because it's not all bubble gum and smiles all the way through. Its that exact reason that keeps me reading your story over and over again.And because i too have an obsession with baby tomatoes.Hehe. But seriously your story is perfect as is no matter what you write someone is going to want to change it to their own ending of what they think should happen.Ill keep you on alert just in case you do change it but i love its realness

Oh wow, I checked your website and it said you were almost finished. I thought I would be reading an entire story, I was even excited...now I'm kind of sad, actually. I'll have to subscribe and lie in wait for something more. Gaspard...I feel like...wow...that dimple is so...wow.

And now I'm going, *

no... i can't believe you're 'renovating' your story. i didn't even get half way through, and now i have to wait to finish reading it :(

hey! ok so i love this story, twas awesome, but i do hav a few problems with it. i kno i shud be praising u, coz really u deserve it, i mean who cud of seen THAT twist coming rite? butu said u were goin 2 revise it? and if we wud like u 2 change the ending? well i thort i wud just put in wot i had problems with and see if u cud change them, no harm rite? i mean no offence by wot i will say and u dont hav 2 do ne thing about it if u want, i wont hate u lol. ok so heres wot i hav problems with: if aaron has knowen leona since she woz 5 and iz gud friends with her, and iz also his best friends baby sister, how ** he hurt her? i kno he had a broken heart but i still dont get y he wud do that2 her. anutha thing, wen did he fall in love with leona? b4 or afta they 'confessed' their 'love' 4 each otha? and iz he still in love with emma brown? i kno u said he loves leo but does he also still love emma? if so, i hate that. and i hate it how he said his 'heart twisted' or sumthing wen he saw emma and chase dance together, shudnt he be head over heels 4 leona? i hated it(again lol) how he said emmas eyes still haunt him, i mean what?! hes supposed 2 love leona! my heart broke rite there!(im sensitive). i wud like 2 read his point of view frm the time he meets berry(in the flesh)uptill the end 2, just throwing it out there:). i want 2 hear his heart break about when leo found out so i can believe he actually LOVES her. does aaron love emma more then leona? does leona mean more 2 him or emma? im sorry but i need 2 kno the answers and read in the story or sumthing about all that, the questions answered and evrything till im fully satisfied with this story. otha then those problems and questions though, its really gud and i love it=). if u dont want 2 change the story or nething then cud u please write 2 me and explain it? seriously im hurting 4 leo here lol. i get affected by stories, sad i kno, but at least u kno that ppl r connecting 2 ur charecters and stuff! lol. so yea. i think theres more but ill leave it at that:). thx so much 4 the story, sharing it, its awesome:D. well i g2g, hope 2 hear frm u soon=), bye

Yes, ending change! Change, change, change. Change it for the better! .o|
I totally agree on polishing this some more if you think you need it. Your writing has probably matured since you finished this.
Good luck w/ it!
8D

Ehh..I'm too lazy to log in.
Anyways: I loved this story! Really Great! I cannot wait for the sequel!! Ep! I excited now, something to look forward to (other than New Moon...oops, sorry, I think I have ADD) Okay...I don't think you need to change anything, but if you insist, its your story. And screw the people who didn't like the ending. It was my favorite kind!
Thanks for a great read =)

~Chelsea Elizabeth

Hey i Loved this story i read it twice. And i think da segeul will be good to.

No! Don't change it! LOL Man I loved it. Aw this was so cute!

I loved how she avoided cussing and the little references to fanfic and fp haha. This was so cute! I will check out your other story... soon. I gotta get my lazy butt off the computer and start doing summer hw =P I pretty much sat here for like 5 hours reading your story haha.

PLEASE don't change it! LOVED it! :D
~*~Ngoc1231~*~

Holy Moly. This is a fantastic story. I just started reading it (silly me for not noticing it before) I absolutely love it. And I will certainly read the rest soon, when I'm not sneaking into my sis's room to steal her laptop at 12am *sh*. Anways, cant wait to read more!!

~Chelsea Elizabeth

DONT CHANGE A THING! THIS STORY IS AWESOME THE WAY IT IS! I LOVED IT!

Yellow
I just read your WHOLE story
like seriously WHOLE GOD DAMN BEST FREAKING STORY IN THE HISTORY OF MY READING INTERNET STORIES!
just to let you know, i have never commented or reviewed or whatever to anyone about their stories
YOU ARE THE FIRST
(hope your happy dancing right now *evils* i'm watching you)

i just read over what i typed and its a tad weird.. I've had chocolate, don't blame me blame the ingredients i just to make them damn brownies!

okai back to what i was saying

This was seriously the best story
i wanted to cry at the fall ball part seriously cry
i ran out to the living room where my dad, mum, and brother were sitting and i told them the whole story up to where i was up to (does that make sense, whoops is it doesn't) and they just looked at me like i was stoned which cause me to laugh...

i felt so sorry for Leona and i wanted to give her a hug...

anyhoo

i'm about to read your other stories

*hug* thankyou for writing it

and i completely understand if you find this weird and confusing but if it makes you laugh then my job is done

I'm Georgie btw
YELLOW (that's hii in my language, boo yeah i have my own language, you wish you were as cool as me)

okai i'm just rambling now
but seriously
you rock
this story rocks

yeah
that basically sums it up
so i'm going to go now
(i am always like this, in real life and on here (internet) always hypo...)
bye
SALUTATIONS EARTHLING



yeah i know weird
you can press the delete button if you have one
i don't know if you do...
BYE

SQUE!

your story is awesome!!

at first, it reminded me of gossip girl, but then as i got into it, it really didnt.

i love leonas randomness. and i have to say, there was a point when i wanted to shoot her for being so incredibly stupid. i thought it was obvious aaron liked her, but obviously not.

oh and at one point, i was considering stabbing aaron with a spoon. and hes a fictional character :). he shoulda told her he was being blackmailed, and not used her like that.

Erica is my favourite character though. shes awesome. and a really really really good friend.

i need to read the sequel now, cos i love your characters.

MS
x

p.s. in regards to your last post... if you change this story in any way i dont think it will get better, i think you might ruin it. keep it the way it is please. Oh and the ending is so cute... Shcnoogle-kins 8D lmfao

p.p.s. Squee is my favourite word at the moment :) and makes me laugh everytime i read it lol

oh my goodness!! -standing ovation- i read this in one day, i couldn't stop! the plot was really good! really creative! there were a few things i wish you would've done differently, like not let leona get heartbroken. but in all honesty i love when it seems like the hero cant save the damsel then theres a long period of time of betrayl and mistrust then a great finish where the walk into the sutting sun holding hands. hey what can i say i'm a hopless romantic (:
oh and i actually started a blog because of this, i just hope it doesn't end up like berry's blog.. now i'm rambling. but bravo anyways!