Wow! That second chapter's ending was unexpected! But it was good! Your story is awesome so far! Keep it up! Update soon!

Holy crap! I didn't expect it to end like that! They were all just looking then they are all dead! lol. I'm guessing this isn't what you had planned at all.

Oh wow I can't believe you put this up! I want to see the second chapter pronto! lol. Your off to a really good start, I couldn't that much wrong with it, well I wasn't looking for mistakes so that might be it. lol. I want to know about Myles! Oh and ha! I'm your first review :P