I liked the idea behind the format here, but I didn't like it because it was inconsistent in two lines with two words per line. The piece also confused me because of the format and lack of punctuation I was not sure what some parts meant like writing/
poetry/on/hill... did you mean a hill? Anyhow I do like the descriptions of the parts in the woods because that was described well.

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Sweet! Sometimes this "one word on each line" just doesn't work, but in this case it really worked out perfectly! I like the perspective, and you have worded yourself very well.
Keep it up!

~Thomicas