wow this story is amazing!

Ah! My favorite story on fiction press is done! What am I going to do! T_T Amazing final instalment, beautifully writtn I just with it was longer...but it was done so perfectly I can't really complain. I hope that the next story you write will be just as amazing as this one because you have a hell of a lot more talent than most people on fiction press. Thank you for the amazing ride with Heavenbound and best of luck with Endbound, I can't wait for it!

~FireRam

Congratulations. Great to see how your writing has changed since you started the story. It's sad to see that it's over. But I am looking forward to seeing the next installment. Dont keep us waiting too long.

I actually feel kind of happy now. And a tad sad. It´s such a fitting ending that I can´t help but smile. Everyone is back to where where they started, just with more experience in their luggage. Narya HAD to be the one to take Lorellin´s soul- it´s only just, innit?

I wonder what Evan did during the mating season? I can´t really see him sitting around twiddling his thumbs, lol. Probably had some insane training sessions, or something alike.

I think, that once Endbound is finished and we´re finished for real with this story-verse I´ll feel awful. It´s such a big part of our friendship now, don´t you think?

And you´re close to the infamous 500 reviews!! Just a bit more! They´ll probably come in time ^^
(Um, laptop´s battery is about to go, got to stop writing)

Lastly, I LOVED Heavenbound, as you already know. I love it to pieces, fanaservice/sadness/tragedy/embarrassing/humour-moments alike.

-big, crushing hug from the little sister-

lol i got a mention:P wel this was a nice chapter. Not dramatic but a nice ending, with lorelin and even. On an unrelated note youre story kinda ruined hellbound. Well not ruined but i kinda know what happenes from this soo...well anyway im putting kanilla on author alert for her story:P

Pmsl, Narya's like a bitch on heat, don't know why I find that so funny.

So, this is the official end of the storry. I must say, its been a good one. Oh, and I hope you know, I hold you completely responsible for your characters growing on me lol.

Anyway, can't wait for the epilogue, Earthbound and what ever else follows it.

P.s

Happy all hallows eve/halloween.



Chaos

Wow this is the second last chapter, and i caught up! Woho! Hahah i was wondering why she was having those thoughts:P Well the demons are back in the cafe, wich im awesomely happy about, there was a mention of lucian,i know im sounding like constantine, and theres gonna be and epilougue!:O Hahah im not sure if i mentioned this but this storys kindave made me insecure about my own religionish onw. LOL. Cant wait till next one:P

Im almost at the end of the chapters you wrote. Woho! And evan seriously cannot say the right things around mind readers can he?:P Finally, there together!

Nice chapter. Loved the bit whit lucien(as always) and i like the line the sophiliath said at the end. Kinda menacing:P

Oh my god there is still so much to find out! And i loved the bit where constantine said he was her boggest fan. Got a bit of psycho fan moment there:P

A sophistle? That sounds bad.

wow shes in trouble. I honestly dont have a clue who that is.

Oh no! Were close to the end!:O Im gonna check out the live journal when im done, or read the new book i bought:

Celles:O Well i thought it was her whoever that guy killed but i wasnt sure:P You and kanilla should bring out a joint story:P

Urial stuttered:O Wow he has grown through the story. Gr evil archangels.