Very representative of the title. This captures the reader's attention quickly, and keeps it. A favorite. Very well designed. MD:77.

"Blooming cortex" was my favorite because it's very alien, also very un-cliche.

I liked this because it was definitely not what I expected. I also liked the word choice because you choice some very powerful word. The punctuation was good too.

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i loved the first one - it definitely depicted englightenment. i also like how you combined two haikus to make one poem.

the second line of the second one, though, wasn't the right number of syllables... so you may want to fix that. :)

anyway, good job. keep writing!

-Lefty

I love the word choices here - very strong and vivid language. The first line is fantastic. I also like the use of the exclamation point; it makes the poem seem very Victorian in style, if that makes sense. Keep writing! :)