I enjoyed this immensely! Very creative challenge and very nice writing. I was shocked by the amount of sympathy I felt for Nelly, so absolutely fantastic job!

I liked it! It was cute and funny. The only thing I saw was that the protagonist is supposed to be bitten, not bite the other person, but it was cute. Funny. And I like the line about Maurice. It's a sexy name.

Heheehhehhe.

Vey well written. (:

And I LOVE the OCD part.

The only thing I've ever had that involved some writing/acting/tvshowing is Monk.

And now, this! Oh, and Matchstick Men. Can't forget Matchstick Men!

Overall, excellent job. And I love all of the originality that you added that completely made the piece your own.

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That was insane, beyond reason, really. But boy, it sure had me laughing for a while! Who! Nice work with this challenge!

Very creative premise. I loved it! Funny without being overly long. I thought the coy/koi line was quite clever. Do they actually have clubs like that?! The idea is more than a little disturbing.

Cassandra

So... That was hilarious! Great job!

i really like this :) its so entertaining and funny! yes you managed to pull it off right :) and rather well.
great job!

This was great. I loved it.

Lol, that's very interesting! Great writing as usual.

Love,
~Dia