You know, I didn't even read the story. I just wanted to comment on the names: Sethiel and Jaile. They're stupid names that don't make a bit of sense. If the characters are going to be nicknamed "Seth" and "Jai", why not just name them Seth and Jay? How hard is that? It's so annoying when authors think they're being creative so they make up stupid names that they think sound cool. Seth and Jay will work just fine.

I want to read more! Update soon!