straight from the review marathon! (link in profile)

wow, i wouldn't be able to tell this was about friendship if it wasn't in the friendship section (and you hadn't mentioned it in the title) i kind of wish you'd addressed that... otherwise, i would have just assumed you were in a delicate situation.

otherwise, it's a great image... i like how it's an open ending with an ellipse, too. it was a nie way to end it... showing that it wasn't actually over yet.

anyway, good job. keep writing!

-Lefty

holy mackerel, that was great. I like how the shells are never totally not gone - I just love your concept in general. I loove this.

The punctuation at the end was odd with 5 dots, not a big fan of that. I like the piece though because you describe the whole eggshells thing very well and there's no background info so the reader can apply it many situations.

PS If you’re bored this weekend check out the Review Game’s Review Marathon (link in my profile)

Wow!
The imagery!
The metaphor!
Incredible!