I love this.
"As I layed next to you..." would sound better as "As I lay next to you..."
Great job! The harpy was a nice piece of symbolism. That sentence was my favourite part.

The ghosts that constatly float around my in the clouds head - "constantly" is misspelled, and "in the clouds" should be "in-the-clouds" since you are using the phrase as an adjective.

I quite liked the imagery, especially "bath of syringes and broken glass". I'm not sure why, but I do.

- Kylie from the Review Marathon (link in my profile)

In terms of the words and phrases, I really like this. It's surreal in the first paragraph and gets a little more real in the second paragraph, but still very pretty. I like the perplexing yet somehow comprehensible idea of "when meaning meant something". Great work.

I don't really like the center allignment of the piece. It looks kind of strange that the last word of the first and second paragraph are alone on a line.

'embrass your smooth skeleton' --I'm guessing you meant 'embrace'?

'As I layed next to' --this should be 'As I lay next to' because lay is the past tense of lie and lay means to set (something else) down.

-Adrian, from the review marathon (link in my profile).