I like how you ended this story, they were both slaves just from different perspectives. And now they are truly free for the first time in their entire lives, because even though Iliyana wanted to grant Kendra freedom she could not do that until she herself was free.
I think that this story makes me want to read more of you're work.

Oh my, this story is so beautiful! I didn't expect the story to end this way, but the surprise made it only more beautiful to me :) I'm really glad they got their happy-end at least (I'm a sucker for happy- ends). Very, very good job!

very enjoyable story, off to read some of your other ones. =)

I'd love to have a life like that...with the person I love, no matter what we do; no matter how minor or how little does it matter to others - it'll probably weight like the whole world to me...xD thats' love, its a great story! xD hehe =)

That story was probably the best I've read in a long time even compared to the books I've brought. The love and tenderness behind it is really touching and the writting style connects well to readers. Very good.