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| Akaiyume 2008-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseI love how complete this story is and that the reader watches the friend along with the 'I' person. Especially the last line of every part finishes it off and surely I can relate since I've lost many friends over the years cause we got older yet I try hard to keep them. So, keep up the good job ;) ~Akaiyume |
| Isca 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseCute! Flowed well. I liked the lines, "And in my memories, our friendship shall last" and "Too soon, too soon, protests my heart." |