That pretty much sums up a broken heart.

~SirScott

Beautiful.

Just beautiful. Wow. The just really sucked me right in!

I love your choice of words and phrases that we've heard before and how you twisted them into something new and gave it new life.

It's overflowing with so much emotion, we're-as in your readers-are all drowning in it.

Your metaphors, similes, repetition of words, everything! Everything is spot on! It's just believable!

Wow. I'm just breathless now. Ha ha ha! Congratulations! I'm totally raiding [reading] your writing now. :)

I like news flash part, I think it's original, it's a cute poem, it doesn't seem sad, it's a like a funny love.

Unbelievable. This, BY FAR, is the most shockingly beautiful piece you have EVER written. My favorite. I can't put into words how much I love this poem. My favorite part, no doubt would have to be "News Flash:/ Cloud nine has officially begun to rain" When I read that, I was just like "Whoa!" You, my very best friend, are a lyrical genius.