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| Juliet21691 2008-05-25 ch 1,  | abusehow true it is that we really want to keep to the things we use to when we were little, and we should still do them from time to time now |
| Amber Seguin 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... my thoughts exactly. I love the repeating lines at the end: "Does it make me any better than I was before? Does it?" It's just perfect. :) |