Reviews for Murder of a Mistress
J112011 11/30/11 . chapter 1
LOL! What an ending! And I loved "ever so slowly, the woman lost hope"
Kumafigher 6/15/11 . chapter 1
This made me go both lol and wtf. I loved it.
CatProduttore 6/7/09 . chapter 1
That was incredible, I have never been able to tell a story in poetry!
Elodie Wolfe 3/28/09 . chapter 1
Pahahahaha. Oh gosh I feel cynical and sadistic and morbid. Best poem ever.

Elodie
Just me and myself 12/10/08 . chapter 1
It's wrong but really funny, love it!
Twilight Starr 6/29/08 . chapter 1
That ending line was pretty funny. Nice title. The rhyming was good. Keep writing!

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

Twilight Starr
Krystal Angeline 6/16/08 . chapter 1
lmao!

Cheeky.

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I think used that word right...

But that was rather amusing!

A bit odd...

But still amusing!
Faith Adeline 5/25/08 . chapter 1
hah, I liked this piece. Very good. I loved the ending.

Faith