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| simpleplan13 2008-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseReally interesting piece. I liked how it is not actually about head lice because that would be kinda gross. I also like the kinda rhyme scheme going on in there, it was a nice addition. Well done. PS If you're bored today check out the Review Game and its Review Marathon (link in my profile) |